| Do you think the loose dark marks on the right side of his face ruin the drawing? |
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71% |
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Dorff
Joined: 09 Oct 2009
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Location: Sydney
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 Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 4:14 pm Post subject: advice and opinions wanted: ink drawing |
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I based this ink drawinf on a Harpers Bizarre perfume advertisement. The right side of his face actually started off as an accident, but then I just went with it, hope you like it. And please answer my poll question, thanks 
photo of pic with flash:
photo of pic without flash:
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Devilbiss
Joined: 06 Jul 2007
Posts: 3214
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| Posted: Sat Oct 10, 2009 4:58 am Post subject: Re - advice and opinions wanted: ink drawing |
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Hey Dorff, It looks good but it seems like you lost it a bit on the shady side.
It's easier to draw one eye rather than two . Isn't it? |
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Stefan Maguran
Joined: 22 Jun 2008
Posts: 2314
Location: The Outsiders Festival State
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| Posted: Sat Oct 10, 2009 9:26 am Post subject: Re - advice and opinions wanted: ink drawing |
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| You could daken more the whole right hand side and it would look better - like a very strong contrast. |
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Chrissy D
Joined: 12 Jan 2006
Posts: 1053
Location: Queensland
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| Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 9:23 am Post subject: Re - advice and opinions wanted: ink drawing |
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I guess it depends what you want to achieve...If your making a statement about appearance/looks/beauty, or no statement at all and the right side of the face was heavily shaded.
I do personally feel it dominants the image and ruins it.
If you dont like it...just tear that side of the face off. The remaining left side still works. |
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