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ocker1 Joined: 27 Sep 2008 Posts: 775 Location: NZ	Posted: Thu May 27, 2010 2:34 pm    Post subject: Jonathan Livingston Seagull the story of Jonathan Livingston Seagull, a seagull who is bored with the daily squabbles over food. Seized by a passion for flight, he pushes himself, learning everything he can about flying, until finally his unwillingness to conform results in his expulsion from his flock. An outcast, he continues to learn, becoming increasingly pleased with his abilities as he leads an idyllic life.
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sunfire Joined: 01 Mar 2008 Posts: 1430 Location: Toodyay	Posted: Thu May 27, 2010 9:30 pm    Post subject: Re - Jonathan Livingston Seagull I think you need a bit af shadow under the gull there Mike, it would make it look more alive, otherwise, very nice.
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ocker1 Joined: 27 Sep 2008 Posts: 775 Location: NZ	Posted: Fri May 28, 2010 11:52 am    Post subject: Re - Jonathan Livingston Seagull Thanks Sunfire, It looks a lot different in the next morning and with your advice
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sunfire Joined: 01 Mar 2008 Posts: 1430 Location: Toodyay	Posted: Fri May 28, 2010 9:06 pm    Post subject: Re - Jonathan Livingston Seagull yes, thats much better, a nice rounded gull now standing firmly on the lid. good one.
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