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ocker1 Joined: 27 Sep 2008 Posts: 775 Location: NZ	Posted: Sun May 23, 2010 5:12 pm    Post subject: two birds in the bush got a lot of work to do but a wee bit of help needed
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ocker1 Joined: 27 Sep 2008 Posts: 775 Location: NZ	Posted: Mon May 24, 2010 1:09 pm    Post subject: Re - two birds in the bush Ok !! If none of yous will look at it I done my own critique, and worked a bit more this morning
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Devilbiss Joined: 06 Jul 2007 Posts: 3209	Posted: Mon May 24, 2010 2:13 pm    Post subject: Re - two birds in the bush OK here's a bit of help. Let's look at the painting with all of the colour taken out so you can concentrate on the all important tones. You'll notice that the birds get a bit lost in amongst the background foliage. You could darken the birds and lighten up the foliage to create more interest in the subject...which is the birds..preparing to make more little birds. The colours are very good and the composition is good as well. I really like this little painting, it's a good one.
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Devilbiss Joined: 06 Jul 2007 Posts: 3209	Posted: Mon May 24, 2010 2:26 pm    Post subject: Re - two birds in the bush Here's a pancake. .
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