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Marty C
Joined: 23 Jul 2005
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Location: Mandurah, WA
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 Posted: Wed Sep 30, 2009 11:48 pm Post subject: Crystal Clear |
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Still stuck on William Bay!
More water and rocks. Next one will have rocks and water instead.
Oil on canvas, 80cm x 150cm or 32" x 60"
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Hayley
Joined: 05 Feb 2007
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Location: Geelong
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| Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 1:38 am Post subject: Re - Crystal Clear |
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Very nice, but have you tried combining (technical term: juxtaposing)something solid, like some rocks, with something more...wet, maybe some water perhaps? Just a thought.  |
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Daniel
Joined: 06 Jul 2007
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Location: Shydney
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| Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 9:42 am Post subject: Re - Crystal Clear |
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Great colours in this one marty!
The colours are great too. |
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Marty C
Joined: 23 Jul 2005
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| Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 5:33 pm Post subject: Re - Crystal Clear |
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Hi, Hayley, thanks. I may take you up on your suggestion!
Hi, Daniel, thanks very much.
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Stefan Maguran
Joined: 22 Jun 2008
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| Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 5:38 pm Post subject: Re - Crystal Clear |
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| Although I agree with both critics, I would suggest not to change the colours as they are great, but to add some water and some rocks, to complete the picture. |
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Marty C
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| Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 9:43 pm Post subject: Re - Crystal Clear |
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Good advice, thanks Stefan!
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Stefan Maguran
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| Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 9:45 pm Post subject: Re - Crystal Clear |
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| Learning from my masters. Great work Marty. |
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